Owen/Nathan
I am confused - I am looking for your technical analysis and detailed product analysis, and from what I can see, you have done this to the same film? You should at this stage have 4 different (and closely related to your concept) film openings that are analysed on the blog (2 each).
You need to address this quickly - before you do your pitch.
Also - the analysis that are there are not detailed enough. You must make an effort to ensure that your planning is detailed as it will improve your final outcome as you will be informed and "inspired". I like your concept, but it needs to be developed further.
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